My husband loves to show me off at his business party and I seldom wear a bra or panties under my tight dresses. Prior to one of these parties I received an email: "I know you are a great fuck, hope to see you at the party. The things I will do to you..." Signed Jerry. I read and re-read this wondering who Jerry was.

In the days leading up to the party I received more of Jerry's emails, each one getting hotter and hotter. He told me my body would be a perfect fit for his massive cock. That he would caress my breasts as he planted his seed in my belly while other can see. I masturbated thinking of who Jerry could be. I finally replied asking what if I resist, I am a married woman. To which Jerry replied, you will love getting fucked by me. You are going to love my cock.

The day of the party my husband told me the party was at one of his new clients home. That he would be spending a lot of time with him trying to lock him in for the firm. I said sure, another boring party I thought.

I dressed that evening in a black dress, 4 inch heels and nothing else. The place was huge. A wow escaped my lips as we pulled up in front . He must be an important client ,after being greeted by a valet. We walked in and was greeted by a host, hello and welcome, please feel free to look around the house. My husband quickly walked off to meet his client. I knew I wouldn't see him again until the deal was made or he would call me over to flash my body or fuck him to close the deal.

I walked around the house liking at the art on the walls. Somehow I ended up in a dark secluded hall looking out a window at a beautifully lit pool below. That's when I felt his breath on my neck, his hands on my hips.
Hello Diane, it's Jerry. My skin rippled with goosebumps as his strong hands unzipped my dress pushing it off my shoulders, as it fell to the floor. He pushed my breasts into the smooth glass . I felt his hardness pressing into my ass as he reached down and placed his cock on my wet pussy. I was willing, I wanted his cock, I wanted his cum. I felt his plum size head split my pussy lips and I let out a load moan as his cock stabbed deep in my pussy. I looked out the window seeing the stars in the sky as Jerry grabbed my hips and plunged deep into my willing honey hole. AAAAAAAAHH AAAAH I screamed as my orgasm constantly took over my body.

My hot breath was fogging the glass , when I heard sounds. Again I heard sounds . I could see my husband standing by the pool with several other men and women who where watching as I pushed back on his cock helping him hit my cervix. I screamed again overtaken with yet another massive orgasm as he started pumping his cum into my married yet very willing pussy. Then I fell to the floor , his cum leaking from my pussy. I never did see him, Then my husband was there, first kissing my lips, then my breasts . Honey you want to go home or stay. Whatever you want baby. My husband help me to a nearby bedroom where I was introduced to my husband's new client.

I received several more emails from Jerry thanking me for the moment we had. I am still wondering who he is.

 

So if we blindfold you would you remember his cock?

 

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loved the story very sexy

 

Very hot.

 

Very hot hopes to read more maybe you get to find out who this jerry really is

 

Your story has a lot of potential. Overall, the premise is enticing, and the story idea is fun.

I think it needs a little more to go from a interesting read to a great story that is well written. I'll give you a few examples. You may not agree. But if you want to know more, send me a PM.

First is editing for grammar. Now, before I say anything about editing, it is best to create and then edit, which I think you did in this case. But you should still edit before you let others read. Bad grammar can get in the way of enjoying a good story.

A very basic edit is in the first sentence. You write, "My husband loves to show me off at his business party and ..." Did you mean that he likes to show you off at his parties -- plural -- not just one party? There are many more examples of editing, but I'll stop there.

Another thought is about that first email from Jerry. Starting with a blatant, "I know you are a great fuck ..." may be going to fast. Or it may skip over the information needed to know why Jerry could write that and get away with it. That is to say it without your character being offended. Maybe the e-mail could start with a little flirting or teasing, that leads to some exchanges between your character and Jerry. Maybe Jerry says that you are such a tease to dress like you do at your husband's parties. And then he asks if you have thought about doing more than teasing. Or if you have ever done more than tease.

As someone commented, it's about the seduction. If you start with him saying he knows you are a good fuck, then it would be very interesting to know how the following e-mails could get hotter and hotter.

Another thought is about details. If your husband is trying to lock someone in for his firm, then either: he is not yet a client of the firm, but your husband wants to get him to be a client; or, he has been a client who has given the firm a small fraction of his business, but he has the potential to make your husband and the firm rich if he were to give the firm all his business. As the writing stands, the situation is not clear. This may seem like a minor point, but the details are important.

I'll stop there. There are many opportunities to improve so many of the thoughts, visions, and actions. PM me if you would like to talk about it some more.

Thanks.

 

And thank you for your story and willingness to share it. Love all the photos you've posted. I might want to use one to write a story and share it with you. Would it be inappropriate to make the character's name Diana?

 

OK. Great. I'll write something this weekend, send you a PM with a copy. It might be a little short. I'm still "trapped" by this huge project that is eating me alive right now. Thanks.

 

No worries.

 

Nice